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Fallen Angel, Fallen Demon Chapter 5, End Book 1

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Time seemed to crawl by in her cell. She was a criminal. She defied her father, her Lord God. She had sinned the ultimate sin.

She rubbed her aching, bloodied feet. Gabriel had shown her no mercy upon her arrest. He beat her as she tried to flee, making sure she would not attempt to escape. To her, it seemed she had become slightly mortal to feel the pain and blood.

“Let my trial come swiftly…” She softly murmured.

“Get up.” Gabriel was at the cell door.

She didn’t move.

“Get up!” He barked at her.

Slowly she stood up. Her dress in was rags, the lovely childishness of her heart gone. She looked at her brother blankly. He grabs her, dragging her to the Hall of Judgment. He throws her at the feet of God.

“Pray.” Was the only word she was told.

She got up to her knees and raised her head to look at her father.

“Pray. Pray for Lord God’s forgiveness.” Zadkiel was at his side.

“No.”

The angels in the hall gasp as her answer echoed through the hall. She stood up.

“I shall not beg forgiveness. I have sinned the ultimate sin. Forgiveness will not fix what I have done. I take my punishment as is. I… I am not afraid.”

God stood up, a soft pleading look fogged his eyes.

“Child, by not asking forgiveness you mark yourself as fair game to both Angels and Demons alike. You are sentencing yourself to be hunted to death by both Heaven and Hell!”

“And I accept it!” She started to cry, anger filled her. Love will not save her now.

God nodded, anger pursed his lips. “Then, Aris, you are hereby sentenced to be hunted for all eternity, marked as a Fallen!”

Gabriel kicked his sister to her knees, grabbing her wings and forcing them open. A painful burning sensation burned at her wings as God’s Power forced them to become burnt black, her sign of becoming a Fallen. She cried out in pain.

When the pain was over, she whimpered.

“Goodbye Aris. You have 2 Human years of freedom. That much I shall give you.” God’s final words to her.

Gabriel let go of her, the clouds under her feet disappearing.

She fell to the Median and hit the ground unconscious.
The End of Book 1! Yay! I've completed a book!
Book 2 is on it's way I promise.

Fallen Angel Fallen Demon Book 1 Chapters:
1: [link]
2: [link]
3: [link]
4: [link]
5: You are here
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IRideAMagicalLadle's avatar
o__________o....................well....................I hate to say that I saw that one coming.
BUT WHAT NOW!? IS SHE ULTIMATLY SCREWED OR IS THERE HOPE???!!!!:icondesperateplz: